'AWAY' improvements

Since the beginning of term we have been making various improvements to our film following suggestions from a focus group we put together. At the end of last term we exported a final video of our film to show to an audience, asked them a series of questions of what they did and didn't like, and what things they would have liked to see.

So, we devised a short list of improvements, with some of our own to enhance the overall product:

 

As we recognise that requesting information from the target audience is vital to create the best and most suitable end product, we took on all of the critique we saw fit.

 

Here is the version of 'AWAY' before the various suggestions were put forward and improvements made: